Question

porfavor me podrian ayudar como se pronuncia y si esta bien escrito mi parrafo porfavor,
good afternoon teacher and classmates I'm going to talk about places I met on my vacations
my family and I traveled to ipiales nariño colombia to the sanctuary of Our Lady of Las Lajas in which we decided to go to church
We started our way to the sanctuary to be going down some stairs, When we arrived we listened to the mass and when we finished we took pictures outside the church and we traveled in the cable car
where we could appreciate the waterfalls and the green grass and the parks, where we looked at those beautiful views

Answer 1

Hola, según yo esta bien pero por si las dudas usa el Traductor de Google, No sólo te proporcionará traducciones, sino que podrás oir una versión sintetizada y bastante decente de cómo se pronuncia cualquier palabra en inglés.