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.Well, first we were ready to hit the road. And after a two-hour trip we arrived at the camp. after set up the tent safter assembling the tents we were fishing while brythany was swimming in the lake
.Brythhany was swimming and suddenly disappeared. We realized that he was drowning.
We take it out of the water and try to revive it.
Then we asked for help and we took her to the nearest hospital.
.Then I realized that I was in the hospital. gerald and stiven were waiting outside while in doctor he told me that he had to be more careful
Afterwards, everyone returned to their home and everything ended well
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Respuesta:
Well, first we were ready to hit the road. After a two-hour trip we arrived at the camp. then we set up the tent, we were caring little details for a better assembling of the tents, we were fishing while Brythany was swimming in the lake. The fish were not hungry and it was difficult to catch them.
Brythhany was swimming and suddenly she disappeared. We realized that he was drowning. We tried to help her,
We were rescueing from the water and trying to revive her.
Then we asked for help and we took her to the nearest hospital using an ambulance. The driver was driving very fast in that lonely road.
Then I realized that I was in the hospital. Gerald and Stiven were waiting outside while in doctor he told me that he had to be more careful
Afterwards, everyone returned to their home and everything ended well
Our parents were worried waiting for us.
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