Question

Write a short story o the past simple tense: (yo puse esto y quiero saber si esta bien o si le tengo que agregar o quitar algo) Andy esa playing football with his friends until his mother came home and the football was over

Answer 1

te recomiendo came back home

Answer 2

Respuesta:

losiento decirte pero esta mal

mira tu parrafo esta muy corto asi que le agregue algo

tambien no es playing ya que se trata del pasado y tu estas hablando de otra cosa. Dame corona y corazon porfas

Explicación:

esta seria la correcho

Andy played football with his friends, he was very happy with his friends.  Until  he had to leave and said goodbye to his friends. He arrived to home. He watched tv. And he went to sleep at night.