Question

Who can help me creating and history with this conditions.
help me
I looked at the clock. I was ten minutes late for my appointment.
I woke up after the operation, and looked in the mirror.
those are the ideas

Rules:
Use the simple past for most of the main action.

● Use the past continuous to set up a background to the events and create an atmosphere.

● Also use the past continuous for actions that are interrupted by another.

● Use the past perfect for “flashbacks,” to take the reader back to events that happened earlier.

● Don’t forget to use time linkers like when, as soon as, then, until, and while to help your story flow.

● Remember also to use good descriptive language, especially adjectives and adverbs, to bring your story alive.

Answer 1

Respuesta:

Last Friday , I was dancing with friends at a party , Marcos drank a lot of alcohol and María felt sad because she was very drunk and it was just the beginning of the party after a few minutes mom called me and told me that my brother was arriving to the bus station , and that I have to take him home , then I protest because I was having so much fun , we were fighting on the phone , after I decided to take my brother home .

When I left the party , Marcos alone called me and told me that the police would take Maria and he ran away from there , when I got home with my brother , told my mother about the situation , then I realized that if there was no obeyed my mom , I too could have been arrested

The good thing is that I had gone to look for my brother , after a while we all met again to go to a party but we ended up going to the beach so there we were having fun in a calmer way , since I had not had the rest because we did not want to repeat what was last time