Question

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this story is about a boy called nick. he wants go to australia because in this place there is a surf´s competition, but his parents dont like surf, because they says the surf is very dangerous. every day nicks tells his parents and say that the competition is very important for him, but not.
a saturday in the beach, nick meets janelle, she is a tall girl with long black hair.
then, a gather more money for the travel that australia, he went another competition, in wich the first prize was a thousand pounds. "But he lost", because brian, the boyfriend of janelle hit his arm. but, after one of the jurors went to tell him and says that he saw what had happened, and nick gave the first prize.
then, nick´s father told nick that he saw that he was surfing very well, and that he could go to australia.

Answer 1

The story is about a boy called Nick. He wants to go to Australia because there is a surf´s competition there, but his parents dont like surf. They think surf is very dangerous. He tries to convince his parents  to let him go to the competition but they keep saying no.
One day, nick was at the beach and he meets a tall girl  with long black hair named janelle.
then, he starts to save some money to visit Australia so he enters to another competition in wich the first place prize was a thousand pounds. He loses the competition because brian, janelle´s boyfriend, hits him in the arm. After the competiton, one of the judges told Nick he saw what happened and so, they gave Nick the first place. 
At the end, his father said he was good at surfing and so, he went to Australia.