Question

¿Qué opinan del siguiente texto y cómo podría mejorarlo?
"Hello everybody, I’m proud to invite you to our fantastic restaurant called “The Happy Castle”, it has that name because there, you eat like a king! It’s a great option if you want delicious and economic food. We have many dishes and you can find a lot of variety on the menu. We have burgers, hot dogs, roast chicken, drinks, and more. In addition, this week we have an interesting and unmissable offer! It’s a 2x1 offer in many of our dishes that you should take advantage of. Also, don’t forget to visit our web page to see more details about all of this. So we'd be glad if you came to our restaurant with your family or your friends to have a nice meal together."

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It is a great option if you want tasty and cheap food. yo lo cambiaría por (if you want to taste an exquisite meal and at a really cheap price) lo demás se ve bastante bien.