Question

Por favor ayúdenme a revisar si están bien escritos estos párrafos en inglés.


I’m going to talk about my cousin. Her name is Naomi. She is 18 years old. She is really friendly because she makes a lot of friends very fast. She is very generous because she helps to dogs at the street. She isn´t patient because she feels angry when she has to wait for a long time. Also she is very smart because she is standard-bearer of her school. She is honest because she never tells lies. She isn´t shy because she has a lot of friends in all the city. She is organized because she always makes a list before she goes shopping. She is optimistic because she is always happy and she thinks that her life is great. My cousin is reliable because I can depend on her and she is very loyal because I can trust her.

Naomi has many talents and abilities. She can dance tango and salsa beautifully. She can´t play soccer, but she can play basketball and chess very well. She can drive cars very fast. She can cook delicious Italian food. She can´t speak Japanese, but she can speak English and German very fluently. She can sing karaoke songs. Also she can run five kilometers every day. She can´t ride a horse, but she can ride a bike very fast and finally my cousin can play the piano and the guitar very well.

She usually buys clothes. She goes to a shopping mall with her mom and her sister on Sundays. She sometimes buys electronic equipment. She goes to an electronics store with her dad and her brother once a month. She usually buys fast food. She goes to a shopping mall with her friends every day. She usually buys books. She goes to a bookshop with her sister on Saturdays. She rarely buys furniture. She goes to a shopping mall with her mom and her dad once a year.

Answer 1

Si esta bien los parrafos eningles tan solo pon punto o como done debe de ser es como ponerlos en español pero en ingles y signo de interrogacion si hay alguna pregunta pero tan solo al final el inivio dd la lregunta en ingles no lleva signo de interrogacion