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Hello,
My name is Susan. I'm forteen and I life in Germany. My hobbys are go to discos,
sometimes I hear music in the radio. In the July I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any
brothers or sisters. We take busses to scool. I visit year 9 at my school. My birthday is on
Friday. I hope I will become a new guitar.
I'm looking forward to get a e-mail from you.
Yours,
Susan

Answer 1

My name is Susan.
I am fourteen years old and I live in Germany. My hobby’s are go to discos and, sometimes, hear some music in the radio.
In July I took a bath in the lake.
I do not have any brothers or sisters.
The day’s to need go to the school, I take a bus.
I go to school since 9 years ago.
My birthday, in this year, fall on Friday.
I will like to have a new guitar.
I hope to get an email from you.
Sincerely,
Susan

Answer 2

Fourteen, (no forteen.)
live no life.
My hobbies Are going to the disco
I listen (no hear)
In July, (no in the July)
I went bathing to a lake
I don’t have siblings
We take buses to go to school
(No se que quieres decir con i visit year 9 at my school)
My birthday is this Friday. I hope my parents give me a new guitar