Question

Podrian decirme si cometi algun error porfavor

Good morning, teacher and friends. Today I present my project of my family.
This is my family. There are three people in my family. My family is the family “Morante” and it is very small.
This is I, He is my father and she is my mother, we live in Puente Piedra and we are very happy.
My name is Ana Miriam, I am 13 years old and I am student. I am the only daughter in my family. I like plays the piano and the violin. I am smart and organized.
My Father’s name is Jesus Alfredo, He is 44 years old and he is an electronic engineer. He loves to travel, sing and the mathematics. He is strict and smart.
My Mother’s names is Maria Isabel, She is 33 years old and she works at home. She likes to dance, read and write. She is funny and sweet.
I love my family is the best.
Thanks you so much for your interest and attention.

Answer 1

En vez de this is I es this is me, cuando pones my mother’s name es sin s al final.