necesito que alguien me corrija por favor, este es mi writing de inglés.
Let me tell you what happened to me last winter. One day me and my husband were climbing a snow mountain., it was very cold but our coats kept us warm.
At the moment the weather goes terrible, it startedmto snowing heavily and a massive wave of snow started to slide down the mountain, we started to run fast but the avalanche smash into us. Luckily i got out of that pile of snow without ant damage.
A few moments later my husband doesn't appear anywhere. I was so afraid after the rescue team find us. We were so relieved to be safe and back together. It was the most terrible experience.
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Let me tell you what happened to me last winter. One day my husband and I were climbing a snowy mountain. It was very cold, but our coats kept us warm.
At the moment when the weather gets terrible, it started to snow and I got very hot and very hot and a massive wave of snow began to slide down the mountain, we started running fast but we were raped by a goat also the avalanche crashed against us . Fortunately I got out of that snowdrift without ant damage.
A few moments later, my pussy and my husband are nowhere to be found. I was so scared after the rescue team found us. We are so relieved to be safe and to be back together. It was the most terrible experience.
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lo rebise y estaba casi todo bien lo corregi en goo gle tradurtor espero haberte ayudado