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necesito ayuda estoy haciendo mi biografía en ingles, alguien me la puede corregir?


My first school year was at school Liceo Nuestras Señoras De Las Nieves where I studied until third grade

In the following year went to study at the school SaludCoop Sur I.E.D over time met people that I can really call friends with whom I shared happy moments and some sad

One of the best experiments was to see the state in Rcn. It was very interesting to know how a novel was developed, to see what it was like behind the scenes,
Know their stories learn from them, listen to their advice their adventures know why they had to spend to get to where they are

perdi el grado octavo asi que quede en el salon de mi hermano pero no estan malo como todos piensan,al contrario nos volvimos mas unidos. Mi hermano sea convertido en mi mejor amigo hacemos todos juntos

eso me sirbio para ser mas aplicada en mis estudios despues de eso siempre ocupaba los primeros 10 puestos


I lost eighth grade so I stay in my brother's room but they are not bad as everyone thinks, on the contrary we became more united. My brother is become my best friend we all do together

That I used to be more applied in my studies after that always occupied the top 10 positions


I live with my parents have been married for 20 years and my two brothers my sister has 14 and my brother 17

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My first school year was at school Liceo Nuestras Señoras De Las Nieves where I studied until third grade

In the following year went to study at the school SaludCoop Sur I.E.D over time met people that I can really call friends with whom I shared happy moments and some sad

One of the best experiments was to see the state in Rcn. It was very interesting to know how a novel was developed, to see what it was like behind the scenes,
Know their stories learn from them, listen to their advice their adventures know why they had to spend to get to where they are

perdi el grado octavo asi que quede en el salon de mi hermano pero no estan malo como todos piensan,al contrario nos volvimos mas unidos. Mi hermano sea convertido en mi mejor amigo hacemos todos juntos

eso me sirbio para ser mas aplicada en mis estudios despues de eso siempre ocupaba los primeros 10 puestos 


I lost eighth grade so I stay in my brother's room but they are not bad as everyone thinks, on the contrary we became more united. My brother is become my best friend we all do together

That I used to be more applied in my studies after that always occupied the top 10 positions


I live with my parents have been married for 20 years and my two brothers my sister has 14 and my brother 17. Solo Tenia Un Error