Question

ME PUEDEN CORREGIR ESTO POR FAVOR



My name is JHOON. I am 20 years old. There are 5 people in my family. My father is Victor. He is 55 .He was born in Puno. He is married with my mom. He is a vet. My mother is Julia. She is 53. She was born in Puno. She is married with my dad. She is a housewife. I have 1 brother and 1 sister .My brother is Clever. He is 25. He was born in Puno .He is single. He is a mechanic
My relative chosen for this presentation is my sister Mariela.
My sister is Mariela. She is 28 years old. She was born in Puno on May 27, 1989. She is medium in size. She has a small face. Long hair. Brown eyes and thin body. She is married and a nurse by profession. She currently lives with her new family. From a very young age. My sister was always a very cheerful and joking girl. She always helped my parents as well as the people. That's why her dream was to be a nurse. She liked school and went out to play with his friends.







My sister was always applied and intelligent as a student. She studied in initial education in the “virgin institution of Fatima” in Puno. She later studied primary and secondary in the school "San Martin" of Socabaya. Finishing her basic studies .After finishing the school began to study the nursing profession In the National University of San Agustín. This is how my sister fulfilled her dream. My sister is currently married. She married in January 2016. Her husband's name is Jose. He is 29 years old. He is an engineer by profession.My brother-in-law is a good person. My sister has a son. The name of her son is José Aldair. He is 4 years old. He is in the garden. He is a very funny boy. Jose Aldair is very dear to my whole family. The activities my sister uses with her family is. Go to the movies. Go to the park and zoo. And always participate in the events of my nephew's garden.
Every year on vacation. My sister always travels with her family. She likes to know new cities and eat new foods. My sister apart from having a nice family has many virtues. Hobbies and tastes. My sister has a lot of hobbies.he likes to go dancing. She likes to watch TV. She likes to listen to music. And she loves to sing romantic music. Her favorite singer is Rikki Martin
Other hobbies my sister makes in her free time is Play Boley and run.My sister has very special likes and dislikes in the choice of dishes. Drinks and fruits. Her favorite dish is ceviche. She does not like chicken. Her favorite drink is coca cola. She does not like beer. Her favorite fruit is orange. She does not like apple.
What always strikes my sister's attention is her big smile. She never gets bored. When she is with my family. She shares her happiness with us.She is very kind and always participates in family activities. She is always very well dressed, loves to wear high heels because she is very small.
Very apart from having many virtues. Tastes and hobbies. My sister is a very responsible person. Every day my sister gets up at 5 in the morning. The first thing to do is prepare your child's breakfast At 6 in the morning she prepares for work. She is going to work at 7 in the morning. Always in her uniform of celestial color. She returns from work at 4 o'clock in the afternoon. At night she supports her son with the homework of the school. That is my sister's daily routine.

She is very supportive of people. That is why she chose that vocation. She currently works at the Goyeneche hospital. She at work is very collaborative with her peers. The work she does allows you to help people in need.
She is very kind to my whole family. She is always ready to support us. She always gives me advice. She always tries to instill values in the family. That is why she is an example for me.

Answer 1

Bien, a mi parecer todo está bien!