Question

Me podrían corregir por favor:( que debo agregar o quitar?
Make a dialog asking and giving information about a famous personality or movie star. Remember to use WH and Yes/No questions.

Alex: Hello Maria, can I ask you about Shakira?
Maria: Yes Alex, you can.
Alex : Where did she grow up?
Maria : Mmm, she grow up in Barranquilla – Colombia
Alex : Correct , you know , and now , another question
Alex: Did you like his music?
Maria : Yes, until now.
Alex: How was his childhood?
Maria: I don’t know, but I think it was interesting
Alex : When is his birth date?
Maria: His birth date is 2 february 1977
Alex: Wow , you know enough about her, That’s all Maria , Thanks

Answer 1

Me parece muy bien, sólo que en lo de su fecha de nacimiento sólo cámbiale a “His birth date is in February 2, 1977

Answer 2

No es his es her porque hablamos de ella (Shakira)