Question

hola quisiera que alguien me diga si esta bien esta rutina que es con present simple, en caso de que haya algún error lo podrían corregir :(

Good morning teacher and class
My name is Lola and I'm going to talk about my routine.
Monday to Thursday my day starts very early, I get up at seven in the morning. I brush my teeth at and then have breakfast. At eight I get ready for my classes.
My classes end at noon, so later I have lunch with my little brother.
Then again I have classes in the afternoons and when they finish I do a little exercise, listen to music or watch videos of my favorite group.
As the afternoon passes I take a shower and start doing homework and group work that I have to deliver on time.
After finishing my homework, I'm going to have dinner. Then I watch a little TV and go to sleep.
On Fridays I usually wake up a little later because I don't have any classes that day, so I usually make lunch and then go out for a while with my sister or my best friend. After everything done in the day I'm going to sleep.
That's all, thanks.

Answer 1

Creo que si estás bien :D

Answer 2

Respuesta:

En general está bien usado el present simple, solo que en la línea donde dice "I'm going to have dinner" escribe sólo "I have dinner" y dónde dice "I'm going to sleep" escribe solamente " I go to sleep".