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HOLA ME PODRIAN DECIR SI ESTE TEXTO QUE HICE ESTA EN PRESENTE PERFECTO? ya lo tengo que entregar porfa no se dejen de llevar por el been .. y eso ESTA BIEN O LE DEBO CORREGIR? O SI SE ENTIENDE AL LEERLO ??

THE GLOBAL WARMING ALWAYS HAVE BEEN A PROBLEM THAT AFFECTS US ALL, SINCE THE PAST, HUMANITY ALREADY HAS BEEN WARNED OF THE CONSEQUENCES, WE NEED TO HAVE A CHANGE, WE HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THE POLLUTION, AND THIS IS DUE TO THE GREENHOUSE GASES PRODUCED BY HUMANITY, DUE TO CARBON FOOTPRINTS.
¿HAVE WE PERMITTED INVESTIGATE THIS PROBLEM?
GLOBAL WARMING HAS BEEN AROUND FOR 180 YEARS. THE PLANET HAS NOT BEEN IMPROVED YET. WE HAVE NOT PROTECTED OUR PLANET AS WE SHOULD. THE PLANET HAS IN CREASED ITS TEMPERATURE FOR A LONG TIME. SOME ORGANIZATIONS HAVE ALREADY TAKEN STEPS LIKE THE EAST AFRICAN DEVELOPMENT BANK (EADB) THEY HAVE WORKED FOR 5 YEARS FOR THIS CAUSE SINCE 2016 IN JUST 1 YEARS MORE THAN 30 POLLUTION COMPANIES HAVE JUST CLOSED THEIR DOORS.
WE HAVEN'T FINISHED HELP THE PLANET YET. BUT IT'S NEVER LATE. REMEMBER REDUCE.

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Contestado por sophiiaa
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Quita el primer always, no es estructura del past perfect. No pongas due 2 veces, se ve redundante. Increased (junto). Por lo demás bien.

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