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The most beautiful and exotic lagoon in the world is definitely the Laguna Moron that is located in Ica.
I have visited Ica a month ago with my family, we have been going to visit 3 oasis of that place, the place has fascinated me for its little forest that has and also its deep water has a depth of 8 meters that is surrounded by dunes, and have a variety of fish in its cold waters, is a very beautiful tourist attraction of our country surrounded with vegetation, dunes and lagoons. Likewise you can find a hut to protect yourself from the sun.
But in the Moron Lagoon you can do a variety of fun activities for the whole family such as kayaking, swimming in the cold waters of the lagoon, and you can also do sandboarding, and has a picnic area with a spectacular view.
In the afternoon you will appreciate the magic hour of the sunset and admire the beautiful Paracas peninsula in its fullness from the top of the dunes with the beautiful Paracas peninsula in the background.

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The most beautiful and exotic lagoon in the world is definitely the Laguna Moron that is located in Ica.

I have visited Ica a month ago with my family, we have been going to visit 3 oasis of that place, the place has fascinated me for its little forest that has and also its deep water has a depth of 8 meters that is surrounded by dunes, and have a variety of fish in its cold waters, is a very beautiful tourist attraction of our country surrounded with vegetation, dunes and lagoons. Likewise you can find a hut to protect yourself from the sun.

But in the Moron Lagoon you can do a variety of fun activities for the whole family such as kayaking, swimming in the cold waters of the lagoon, and you can also do sandboarding, and has a picnic area with a spectacular view.

In the afternoon you will appreciate the magic hour of the sunset and admire the beautiful Paracas peninsula in its fullness from the top of the dunes with the beautiful Paracas peninsula in the background.

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