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Hola alguien podría añadir o cambiar una oración con if en este texto que tenga sentido.
Doy corona.


First I want to introduce myself, my name is Alvaro Quintanilla and I was born and live in Benavente since 1989.

The reason of my letter is because I am really worried about an issue that I can see in my city several years ago. Actually about 30% of the population are unemployed and many of them are young people like me.

For this reason I wanted to asked you a solution. In my opinion there are many options which could help people to find a work, for example cut taxes or increse the opportunities to create a business.

Here you can see only two ideas but I am sure that you can do so much more.

I really hope that you can change this situation.

Thanks and a greeting.​

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Respuesta:

Espero que te sea útil. ;)

Explicación:

First I want to introduce myself, my name is Alvaro Quintanilla and I was born and live in Benavente since 1989.

The reason of my letter is because I am really worried about an issue that I can see in my city several years ago. Actually about 30% of the population are unemployed and many of them are young people like me.

That's why I wanted to ask you if you can give me a solution. In my opinion, there are many options that could help people find work, for example, lowering taxes or increasing opportunities to create a business.

Here you can see only two ideas but I am sure that you can do so much more.

I really hope that you can change this situation.

Thanks and a greeting.​