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hola alguien me ayudaria corrigiendo si esta bien lo siguiente? por fas "My room is so small, the first you see is my bed,on the floor you can see one carpet, i dont have a bedside, but i have a desk.
next to the desk there is a shelving whit books and notebooks,
in front of my bed there is a closet with my clothing in side, betwen my bed there is a window. Finally on my door i have a poster of my favorite group like decoration. Oh! i forget that i have a chair in front of my desk.
You like my bedroom?"​

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Contestado por valerianfp
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My room is pretty small, the first thing you can see is my bed, there is a rug on the floor. Unfortunately, I don't have a nightstand, but I have a desk.

Next to it, there is a shelf with books and notebooks. Also, in front of my bed you can find a closet with my clothes inside and between my bed there is a window.

Finally, on my door, I have a big poster of my favorite band. Oh! I forgot that I have a chair in front of my desk.

Do you like my bedroom?

Tu writing está bien, solo corregí algunos signos de puntuación y vocabulario. Good Luck! :)


wxnter: muchisimas gracias!! <3
Contestado por estelagartijonxd
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My room is very small, the first thing you see is my bed, on the floor you can see a carpet, I don't have a bedside, but I have a desk.

next to the desk there is a shelf with books and notebooks,

In front of my bed there is a closet with my clothes inside, next to my bed there is a window. Finally on my door I have a poster of my favorite group as decoration. Oh! I forgot that I have a chair in front of my desk.

Do you like my bedroom?

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