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The Red Forest
One time one group of people went to the forest and they stayed in that camp for the weekend.
The forest was very scary for the group at night but they decided to stay there. The first night passed quickly but in the morning, they saw strange figures around the camp. They knew it was their imagination, so they ignored it, one night and two days after arriving to the forest, but the last night they saw a red tree near the camp.
They went to investigate it and they hear the sound of a phone in a rucksack. The rucksack was covered in blood. They took the rucksack and went to the camp. In the camp they opened the rucksack, took the phone and called someone. Then, they heard a voice message saying "Get out of my camp and never return."
The group was scared when one of their members dissapeared. They looked for him but they couldn't find him. At 3:00 am, they saw a shadow near the rucksack. They looked in the rucksack and found their friend, dead.
After that night, the group dissapeared and the police looked for their members. They couldn't be found afterwards...