Contexto: esto es un proyecto que tengo y debe ser en pasado continuo y nose si cumple eso me ayudarían mucho si me corrigieran ejemplo:en vez de esto pon esto. si no es mucha molestia
At a garage sale a woman with her baby was interested in a doll.
The seller tells her that this was the doll of her daughter who unfortunately died.
With the doll in her hands and she wants to get rid of those bad memories.
The woman did not pay attention to it and decided to buy it, but something strange happened and when she went to take the doll, the baby had it in her hands, but it seemed normal to her.
Days passed and in the house there were scratches on the walls sounds of falling furniture and strange drawings but she thought they were her nephews who were visiting, the woman weeks later wanted to travel with her baby left several things and one of them was the doll as they would only go 2 weeks once at the airport she noticed that the baby was pale and asked for help, everything was tried but unfortunately the baby had died, the causes of the great surprise that the doll was inside the baby was investigated.
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At a garage sale a woman with her baby was interested in a doll. The seller tells her that (this was the doll of her daughter MEJOR DI "IT WAS HER DAUGHTER'S) who unfortunately died, (With the doll in her hands and ELIMINAR ESTA ORACIÓN) she wants to get rid of those bad memories.
«At a garage sale a woman with her baby was interested in a doll. The seller tells her that it was her daughter's who unfortunately died, she wants to get rid of those bad memories.»
The woman (did not pay PARA USAR LO QUE SE TE PEDI MEJOR "was not paying) attention (to it ELIMINAR) and decided to buy it (AGREGAR "anyway"), but something strange (happened MEJOR "was happening") (and ELIMINAR AND Y SEPARAR ORACIONES) when she went to take the doll, the baby had it in her hands, (but ELIMINAR BUT) it seemed normal to her.
«The woman was not paying attention and decided to buy it anyway, but something strange was happening. When she went to take the doll, the baby had it in her hands, it seemed normal to her.»
(Days passed MEJOR "Days were coming and going") and (in the house there were MEJOR DI "the house was getting scratches") scratches on the walls, sounds of falling furniture and strange drawings (but SEPARAR ORACIONES Y ELIMINAR BUT) she thought they were (caused by) her nephews who were visiting (AGREGAR "at the moment"), (SEPARAR ORACIONES Y ORDENAR "Weeks later, the woman") the woman weeks later wanted to travel with her (baby MEJOR DI "kid" o "child") (SEPARAR ORACIONES Y DECIR "She asked her to leave[si el bebé es niña] o she asked him to leave [si el bebé es niño]) left several things and one of them was the doll as they (MEJOR DECIR "they were going for only two weeks") would only go 2 weeks (SEPARAR ORACIONES "Once ay the airport, she) once at the airport she noticed that the baby (was pale MEJOR "was getting pale") and asked for help, (SEPARAR ORACIONES Y DECIR "People tried everything") was tried but unfortunately the baby had died, (SEPARAR Y DECIR "The misfortune was probably caused by the doll inside the kid"). the causes of the great surprise that the doll was inside the baby was investigated.
«Days were coming and going, and the house was getting scratches on the walls, sounds of falling furniture and strange drawings. She thought they were caused by her nephews who were visiting at the moment. Weeks later, the woman wanted to travel with her child. She asked her to leave[si el bebé es niña] o she asked him to leave [si el bebé es niño]) several things and one of them was the doll as they were going for only two weeks. Once ay the airport, she noticed that the baby was getting pale and asked for help. People tried everything, but unfortunately the baby had died. The misfortune was probably caused by the doll inside the kid.»
Explicación
Bueno, cambié algunas cosas para usar más la gramática que te piden "past continuous (was/were + verb-ing)". También revisé algunos detalles de redacción, separando oraciones, reescribiendo el orden, cambiando y agregando palabras. Good luck mate!