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Have you ever been in Asia?
Well, I’m going to talk about Thailand
This country has from mountains to forest.
I’m sure that you have never experienced anything like that
•Let’s star in Bangkok, Bangkok has been calles the Venice of the East, because it’s built on a river. Also here you can tourist boat and visit the real Bangkok.
A fact is that the people who take care of the river have been making money from tourist for year.
Anyways if you want to have a good experience in Bangkok you going to stay in luxury resort in the middle of the forest. this place is one hour from Bangkok.
•Phi Pho island Is one of the oldest islands in the country that Is why families have been living there for thousands of years, also in this island you can stay in a ranch and enjoy the beautiful view of the mountains.
The only bad thing about this island is that the water is too hear, also sharks have been living there for a long time. People said that they have never seen a shark attack in years, but the people who lives there have been able too warn people in time.
•Pai is a little town located in the top of the mountains in this town you can find a lot of options to visit hill tribe. In other hand you can visit one of the largest banana plantations in the world.
the people who live in Pai have been growing crops in hill side also banana plantation and another vegetable have been taking over more crops.
•Finally Ko Panyi. The families who lives there have been fishing for years, but recently they families have been making money from tourist. Anyways in this village you can’t find resorts or hotels just a simple farm where you can stay.
The only bad thing about this Island is that they have been floods and forest fires for the last two years.
Anyways Thailand is a beautiful country to visit but if yo haven’t been to Thailand yet,
This need to be your next place to visit.
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Hola, he corregido el texto y he visto unas cuantas faltas,
He vuelto a escribir lo de manera correcta:
Have you ever been in Asia?
Well, I’m going to talk about Thailand
This country has from mountains to forest.
I’m sure that you have never experienced anything like that
•Let’s start with Bangkok, Bangkok has been calles the Venice of the East, because it’s built on a river. Also here you can tourist boat and visit it.
A fact is that the people who take care of the river have been making money from tourist for year.
Anyways if you want to have a good experience in Bangkok you going to stay in luxury resort in the middle of the forest. this place is one hour from Bangkok.
The only bad thing about this island is that the water is too hear, also sharks have been living there for a long time. People said that they have never seen a shark attack in years, but the people who lives there have been able too warn people in time.
Este texto ya està corregido, però solo te quiero decir que la palabra "Bangkok" està muy repetida y yo creo que se tendria que cambiar por un pronombre, te he dejado esta tarea para ti. !!
Espero haberte ayudado mucho.
Gracias
Adios!!