Question

Aparte de estas emociones hay más? y la historia en ingles esta bien escrita o no? Si no esta bien escrita me ayudan?

Answer 1

There was once a special day. It was my birthday. For others it was a normal day, but for me it was not. I was so excited because my friends and family were going to wish me a happy birthday. My dad woke me up singing Happy Birthday while holding a cake. Everything was fun because (no entiendo la parte de "the confundi while they were singing", dime qué quieres decir y te lo traduzco). After that, I got up and went to have breakfast because he was hungry.

While I was having breakfast, my parents were preparing a present for me. They covered my eyes and I got a big surprise. It was the gift I wanted! My first video game console. I thanked them and I went to try it out in the TV. I was so happy until it was 12AM and I had to go take a bath, dress up, pack my things and go to school.

Lastly, my friends and teachers wished me a happy birthday, too. But I was sad, because that day someone could not come to school. I had a great time at school and I got more gifts. The school ended and I went home. I made my homework and went to play some more. After a while I was getting sleepy, so I turned off the console and went to eat. I brushed my teeth, climbed to my bed and went to sleep.