Question

Alguien que sepa ingles, sobre todo gramatica y me ayude en esto?
Mi gramatica y el texto es bueno?
es la descripcion de mi ciudad
*NO NECESITO TRADUCCIÓN*

Aguascalientes is a city in northern Mexico. It is a small city, and it has a population of approximately 13,000 inhabitants. In Aguascalientes, August is sunnier than February. Aguascalientes is as beautiful as Guadalajara. Both are beautiful cities, but without a doubt Aguascalientes is safer than San Luis Potosí.
I live in one of the most popular and interesting cities in Mexico. The living in my city is not so cheap, some things are more expensive than in other cities, renting a flat for instance. Another kind of things are cheaper, like food or eating in a restaurant. My city is small, and very crowded but beautiful. Here is not very cold in winter and summers are sunny and warm. In Aguascalientes there are many places to visit such as: art museums, shopping centers or interesting buildings and quiet parks. It is famous for its national fair of San Marcos and its traditions such as the Señor del Encino fair and the regional corn fair.
I have known this place since I was a child. It brings back so many memories of weekends spent with my family. This city is very exciting, there is nothing better than taking a walk through the Rodolfo Landeros park. I am fascinated. But if you walk through the entire national fair of San Marcos, you'll end up tired.

Answer 1

Respuesta:

Muy bien, pero algunos errores:

"Another kind of things are cheaper" cambialo por Some things are cheaper.

"Here is not very cold in winter". Cambialo por Here it's not very cold in the winter.

El resto está perfecto. Una cosa: Cuando una palabra en ingles empieza por i, da igual que sea en medio de una frase, va en mayuscula. Siempre.

Espero haberte ayudado!!!♡