Question

alguien que me corrija los errores que tenga por favor
when stella arrived (arrive) at her best friend's hause, she take (take) a shower so she had to wait. While her best friend, cathy get (get) dressed, stella sat(sit) on her bed looking at magazines.
she ( turned) the pages of the magazine when she find(find) an article about palomino in la guajira in colombia' it looked like such an amazing place they both decide (decide) to travel there for their next vacations.​

Answer 1

Respuesta:

ok lo haria pero si me dices que dice en español para ver si esta bien tu ingles , gracias

Answer 2

aqui está correjido !! ;;

when stella arrived (arrive) at her best friend's house, she was taking (take) a shower so she had to wait. While her best friend cathy was getting (get) dressed, stella sat (sit) on her bed looking at magazines.  she turned (turn) the pages of the magazine, when she found (find) an article about palomino in la guajira in colombia', it looked like such an amazing place. they both decided (decide) to travel there for their next vacations.