Question

¿Alguien podría decirme si está bien escrito gramaticalmente? Es que lo hice con el traductor de google, pero no estoy segura de que esté bien. Por favooor:(

Legend has it that a beautiful woman lived in Japan, but she was very vain. She married a very powerful samurai. The woman was so beautiful, that other men constantly wanted her, this caused her to be unfaithful to her husband repeatedly, the annoying husband of these infidelities and in a fit of jealousy and anger, took his katana and cut off her mouth from side to side, while his screaming, do you think you're beautiful?

Legend has it, that since then the woman became a demonic spirit, or as it is known in Japan, a Yokai, who would return from the dead to terrorize and kill.

Legend has it that this Yokai would become known as Kuchisake-Onna and that she walks the streets with her face covered, either with a mask or with her kimono at night, especially in those that are darker and darker and if she is with a young man he asks, "Am I beautiful?" If the young man answers yes, she takes off her mask and asks: "What now?"

Most likely, the young man will yell or answer no, then the woman will cut his mouth from one side to the other with scissors.

If the young man answers yes nervously, she will follow him and murder him for lying.

Legend? Reality? You will be the one to decide, but if you go to Japan and have to go out on a foggy night, on a dark, gloomy night ... think twice before venturing out to walk any of its streets, since you could meet Kuchisake-Onna.

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Answer 1

Respuesta:

si esta bien escrito pero depende si es Inglés Estados Unidos o Inglés Inglaterra porque cambian algunas reglas