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Nowadays , in the cities there are roads with traffic everywhere. Consequently, people can’t walk around their city in peace. Therefore, in the cities should be pedestrian-only zone.

First of all, for the pedestrian it is more comfortable to walk on a pedestrian street than on a street surrounded by cars. If the street is pedestrian-only zone and you need to cut across it, you would be safer when going from one place to another.

Secondly, the cities are full of pollution and adulteration. This is due to the large number of vehicles that people use. People commute to the city by car every day, they shouldn't do this, they should go walking.

To sum up, from my point of view we need city centres to be pedestrianised, in order to reduce pollution and make the city more comfortable for its inhabitants.

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