Question

alguien me puede decir si este review esta bien??

advengers

have you ever go to the cinema to see a film about heroes that made you feel like you were there? well i saw "advengers end game" last Saturday and i love it!

the film is about a villian call thanos that want to destroy the 50% of all in the universe and some superheroes have to stop him, the film take part in a lot of places such as the space, ee.uu or other planets. i'd say that is a type of fantacy and action film with superheroes and the actors were spectaculars

for me the best part of all the film was the ending. I'm not going to spoil what happens but it was totally full of action the special effects were amazing I mean all the explotions, shoots and that types of things were very detailed and that was for my the best part

i would recommend it for those who enjoy action and shooting films or superheroes too. make sure you don't miss it, you should definitely give it a go

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Respuesta:

Está casi perfecto!

Lo único que talvez modificaría es el final: I totally recommend it for those people who enjoy action or superheroes. Do not miss it; you should definitely see it.

Además otros pequeños detalles que note: no se como sea tu tarea, pero en general las reviews son textos formales, así que no se utilizan contracciones. Por ejemplo, en el I´m, sería I am. En una parte dices EE.UU; allí iría USA.

Por ultimo, no olvides las mayúsculas.

Mucha suerte con tu review.