Question

alguien me puede corregir la gramatica de este texto plis

The week starts from Monday to Friday I get up at 6:09 in the morning I stay in bed for 1 minute I get up and go and take a shower I get dressed and have breakfast at 7:00 am I go to school I arrive at 7:15 later I take my day of classes I finish at 1:45 pm my father comes to pick me up and I go home I arrive at 1:55 as I change my food I use my phone for half an hour I open my computer and do my homework while I watch youtube depends on the classes I finish homework normally at 5:00 pm then I play with my friends at 7:00 pm I have dinner then I play with my brother for 1 hour and then I go back to playing on my computer and at 10:00 pm I go to sleep until the next day

Answer 1

Esta muy bien pero te faltan muchos puntos y comas.