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Alguien me podría corregir mi escritura, debía usar past simple y past perfect pero aun me confundo un poco

My favorite experiences is I went ice skating to Monterrey, But also when I visit Zacatecas last year whit my friends, they paid for rides and games it was very very extraordinary, And the last experience was when my cell phone screen broke in full online classes, I was here at home very desperate because some teachers asked you for the job at that time and I had to take photos, very bad experience but everything happened

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One of my favorite experiences is when i went ice skating to Monterrey, but also when i visited Zacatecas last year with my friends, they paid for rides and games, it was very extraordinary, and the last experience was when my cellphone screen broke in online classes, i was there at home very desperate because a teacher asked for the homework and i had to take photos, very bad experience

no sé que quisiste decir al final pero esas son todos lo errores que encontré, espero te sirva ♡